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Technique #4: Writer's block is an indication  of a larger plot or structural issue; go back and re-evaluate.  First, let me define writer's block.  I don't mean staring at a blank page, not knowing how to begin.  I don't know what that is -- maybe not knowing what your next project's going to be -- but it isn't writer's block.

What I mean by writer's block is when your story is moving happily along and suddenly you hit a roadblock and are unable to continue.  Now nothing seems to work and you spend hours, days, even weeks, wrestling with a specific scene or chapter.

Often it's not the scene or chapter itself that's causing the problem but a larger plot or structural issue that, when solved, eliminates the problem.

Example:  I was working on the third draft of my science fiction trilogy when I ran into a case of writer's block that for weeks left me puzzled about how to continue.  In the scene, my protagonist was in a dark, thickly-treed, alien forest.  After weeks of being relentlessly pursued by an army of colonial militia, thousands of troops were finally closing in on him.

In previous drafts his escape had been easy enough to craft.  But now, in draft three, he kept getting shot!  As much as I tried, what had worked in drafts one and two wasn't working now.  I was baffled for weeks until I learned that writer's block is often the result of a plot flaw or structural problem.

When I reevaluated the overall story, I realized that I had made the army that was hunting for my hero a lot stronger than I had in previous drafts.  So, when I tried to have him escape, it no longer seemed plausible that he could simply slip away.  I eventually solved this problem by inserting a new scene from the army's perspective, listing out all the difficulties they'd had during their long and tedious search.  As a result, it made the army seem less omnipotent, made the story more three-dimensional, and allowed my character to get away in the manner I'd originally intended.

 

Technique #5: As writers we are all mini project managers.  Plan!  Think for a minute of all the tasks necessary to write a book through to publication:  There's creating a plot or story idea, coming up with the conflict, story arc, main and impact character through-lines, etc.  There's creating memorable, interesting characters.  There's writing the first draft, editing and rewriting successive drafts, and formatting your manuscript for submission.  There's authoring a query letter, writing a synopsis, and researching and contacting the appropriate agents and editors who might be interested in your work.  And when your book gets accepted for publication, that's when the work really begins.  All together, the process could take months or even years to complete.

My point is that writing a book is a complex project.  By default, then, we as writers are all de facto project managers.  One of the things you'd hear if you trained to be a project manager is that on a good project, half the time as project manager is spent planning. 

At the top of this article, I told you I'd written my 110,000-word novel in just ten weeks.  But what I didn't tell you was that I spent the ten weeks prior to writing it sketching out scenes, characters, and settings.  In short, I had a plan.

Notice, I didn't use the word outline.  The term "outlining" has a lot of unnecessary baggage attached to it.  Planning may mean writing an outline or it may mean organizing notes about your characters, plot, and setting.  It could mean jotting down ideas or historical background.  Or it might mean having a mini-recorder on hand to capture dialogue or fragments of prose.

If you were a good carpenter and you had enough wood, concrete, nails and the proper tools, there's nothing stopping you from successfully building a house.  But I submit that if you had a blueprint, you could build the house better, quicker, and more efficiently.  The same applies to writing your book.

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